Chaotic Seconds Comments
Your tongue becomes a
stretch of your
scream. It is, in fact,
a lying tongue, which
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True words! In dreams we always seem to have so much more patient LOVE. That can endure until the end of time. Beautiful! ! !
Well-written++++++++++++++++++++++ congrats on being selected for the day.....
The light dances on our exhausted bodies.....beautiful poem. Full of complex meaning and excellent style. Congratulations for poem of the day place Marieta Maglas.
screaming simplicity becomes condensed into utter chaos, then sleep prevails
A deceiving person has a lying tongue, and can be trusted.
Love transforms all, a beautiful poem Marieta. Congratulations being member of the day. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Refreshing in its complex creativity. Reading this is like running my fingers over a finely crafted working of wood and feeling the love of the maker's craftsmanship in the smoothness of the surface, the delicacy of the arching, the flawlessness of the joinery. Pure pleasure to read and contemplate. Thank you, good poet, and bravo. :)
Indeed love transforms chaotic situation into an acceptable one as in dreams! Congratulations!
Sometimes I wonder, How many ideas we shall until we ran out of them For once we ran out We will be reliving the past But poetry shall bloom with your poem You set a new stage of veiw +10
some times i think you read my mind..'dear'....iip .............. :)
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7/25/2025 8:13:40 AM # 1.0.0
Hi Marieta, Congratulations on getting selected as poet of of the day. And this poem, which so well-versed (sorry for the pun) , deserves it. Congrats.