Tuesday, October 7, 2008

Chaos Rules For Friend Thad Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Dragoness last of her race.
Lies somnolent beneath the sun,
there will be none to take her place.
Remembering her youth long gone.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Thad Wilk 04 May 2009

Hi Ivor! ! A most splendid read indeed! ! A mesmerizing poem & story... Best regards! ! *10plus* ! ! Friend Thad

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Ann Beard 07 October 2008

I love this story Ivor, a gentle nature is never equiped for battle. yet many species are lost to brute force. sorry I could, nt figure the third line of the third verse (which quickly and grew again.) but well worth a 10 Loved it. Ann

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Neil Marsden 07 October 2008

This is an immensely deep and powerful piece of poetry that benefits from being read over and over again, each time getting better than the last - Wonderful write! Take Care - Neil.

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