Tuesday, August 29, 2017

Chaos Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.6

Are you confused and a bit worried
Feeling  very heavy and frustrated
Just close your eyes for a while
Listen to your favorite music
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 September 2022

Smile and face the situation boldly...an excellent piece of advice. Great

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2017

A refined optimistic spirit is brilliantly articulated in this brief charming write

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Richard Beevor 24 October 2017

Perfect advice Rini in a perfectly rounded poem, excellent my friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

Deep! ! Inner Self. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 10 September 2017

Thanks for your comments Edward.. Rini

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Dev Anand 29 August 2017

worrying is worse....yes truly worrying does not bring anything in life. you have portrayed a psychological truth. faith in God is the medicine for worry.. dev

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Rini Shibu 29 August 2017

You are right Dev, faith in God cures all worries d

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Unnikrishnan E S 29 August 2017

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem exuding confidence, positive energy. A simple one-step answer for all confusion worries and frustration: Just close your eyes for a while Listen to your favorite music Take a deep breath and relax Or share it with someone dear And you will feel lighter; That is it! Just Smile and face the situation boldly! Well done...A lovely 100+++

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Rini Shibu 29 August 2017

Thank you so much for commenting

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2017

How to tranquillize the worried and frustrated mind is well known to you dear Rini as it reflects in your poem ablaze. It me be quoted... Are you confused and a bit worried Feeling very heavy and frustrated Just close your eyes for a while Listen to your favorite music Take a deep breath and relax Or share it with someone dear And you will feel lighter Beautiful poem.

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Rini Shibu 29 August 2017

Thanks for your comments Kumar

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Lamar Cole 29 August 2017

Very nice poem that gives great advice.

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Rini Shibu 29 August 2017

Thanks for reading Lam

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