Monday, November 24, 2014

Chaos Of Christmas Near Comments

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hustle bustle in the shops
computers always down
however time it never stops
in Christmas rush i drown
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 24 November 2014

Hello again poet Lee, nice work and great little poem. Have a great week, Loyd

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Gajanan Mishra 24 November 2014

very fine writing my dear poets, thanks..

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 24 November 2014

Hello poet friend lee. I enjoyed your poem which captures one of the true pictures of Christmas. I found it smooth and enjoyable. FYI: I might have written the last verse as follows: my blood pressure it does arise hearing babies and kiddie cries parents saying maybe next year how that parent lies as the chaos of Christmas near Just a thought. Loyd

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