Chaos In The Blood Poem by DM W

Chaos In The Blood

Rating: 5.0


Chaos in the blood:
A cadence I cannot break,
As I scan the air,
And hold on to the frail light.
Trees appear surreal.
And leaves look broken in time.
Order seems to be
A dream, that I cannot grasp.

Sunday, August 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: chaos
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dominic Windram 02 September 2020

Thanks Shaun...much appreciated.! Yes, I think there is definitely a pinch of Salvadore Dali in this one...which is great because I wanted it to have a very surreal feel.

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Shaun Cronick 31 August 2020

Is it just me or do a see a pinch or two of Salvador Dali here in your fine chaos poem Dominic. All that's missing are images of waxen melted timepieces from his The Persistence Of Memory for the full surreal effect. A full score and well written and added to my poems of chaos favourites. Thanks for sharing Dominic and I wish you well good sir.

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