Chaos in the blood:
A cadence I cannot break,
As I scan the air,
And hold on to the frail light.
Trees appear surreal.
And leaves look broken in time.
Order seems to be
A dream, that I cannot grasp.
Is it just me or do a see a pinch or two of Salvador Dali here in your fine chaos poem Dominic. All that's missing are images of waxen melted timepieces from his The Persistence Of Memory for the full surreal effect. A full score and well written and added to my poems of chaos favourites. Thanks for sharing Dominic and I wish you well good sir.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks Shaun...much appreciated.! Yes, I think there is definitely a pinch of Salvadore Dali in this one...which is great because I wanted it to have a very surreal feel.