Chaos Poem by Mohosiul Haque Alvi

Chaos

Rating: 4.3


You haven't seen the chaos in my mind
Tears i bleed at midnight
For you,
Instead of feeling love
You have neglected,
You never try to listen my wail
Instead of listening
You have given me a name
'peasant'
I am not saying that
You have to love me
Just listen me for
One more time.

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i am just trying to writting poems.pls give a review who reads it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Loved the way you have presented the pain. " the chaos in my mind Tears i bleed at midnight "… passionate… emotional.5 *s

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Evelyn Morianos 04 February 2022

I liked this poem and it made me sad as this is so true about relationships breaking down. Well done

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