Wednesday, August 31, 2011

Chaos Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are a neutron star,
Spinning into darkness
Waiting to explode
Holding onto space for
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Stefanie Fontker
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Matthew Petranovich 14 September 2011

This was amazing! I love the way you made stars seem! 10++

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Shadow Girl 10 September 2011

Gravity is not worth much if u r not happy with the force. 'It is vain to say human beings ought to be satisfied with tranquility: they must have action and they will make it if they cannot find it. Millions are condemened to a stiller doom than mine, and millions are in silent revolt against their lot.' - Charlotte Bronte (Jane Eyre) .

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 September 2011

Incredible poetry and best way to explain natural disaster in lucid manner.Well done and hats off!

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