bright hungry flames leap high into dark fever night
vomiting orange red sparks liberated seed demon teeth
chanting chanting disease racial hate Nazi death anthem
books are aspirations hope yearning longing dreams
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Due to the serious nature of the holocaust I dis not deal with these events in a single poem. I did a little historical context, slices of some events. Reading in order some are A Vibrant Life Appeasement For Adolf Hitler Indomitable Will To Survive Legal Genocide Committed On Industrial Scale Stone Cross Prologue Stone Cross Cartoon Caricature Of The Master Race The SS: Who Will You Kill? Classic Dance Steps Peaked Cap: Skull-And-Crossbones Badge
I was surprised anyone read this poem, due partly to length. The question is when writing about the brutality of the holocaust, which this poem does not even touch on, are a few emotive words like 'dark fever night', 'seed demon teeth', too much or not enough. Does this sort of poem does really represent a new departure in form and technique for me? Maybe it is a return to a past form and technique. I had over 34 holocaust poems written in a file, even without adding a few later editions.
A rather long poem, which reads, in part, like prose. Possibly too many emotive words-'dark fever night', 'seed demon teeth'. However, this sort of poem does represent a new departure in form and technique for you.
some of the concluding poems were A Moral Civilized World The Death Of Adolf Hitler’s Personal Physician Dagmar Topf: A Defence Of Family Ovens Not To Be Written Struck Down With A Thunderbolt Love Has Rewards Worth Attaining SS Demons if anyone is interesting I will message more to you.