Saturday, January 3, 2015

Chant Their Names Billion More Times... Comments

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When You know what is good for me,
Why should I send my lists of wants to You
When You choose the right path for me,
Why should I wander in the jungle of the canopy,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 03 January 2015

Loved the first verse. The last two lines of the second verse do not flow well. Nice poem about gods.

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