Changing World Comments

Can I change the shape or shape the change Thoughts relevant in mind to face! Use of 'change and 'shape' as verb and noun in the same sentence adds a dramtic effect to the whole poem. The theme is beautiful, the composition is fabulous and to top it all, the message at the end is simple and clear. This is another precious gem in your anthology.

Great message sir, and in a very good, sweet way Thanks a lot

Well said and sounds very poetic too.10

nothing is permanent except change excellent poem

time makes changes in all of us; in all our lives...learn to accept not to resist...a poem with a good message...*10*

sir, thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts with all. i really appreciate. it is a very nice poem, thought provoking, gives an opportunity to rethink..........

Another good poem here Subbaram you are indeed a thinking person well done again

I see, I hear, I feel the power of these words..

Pretty loud(!) . I guess the feeling is too...