Saturday, January 30, 2010

Changing Times Comments

Rating: 5.0

The vibrant colours
In a darkening sky
With the orange sphere
Remaining at the centre
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Sandra Martyres
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 06 February 2010

a lovely sunset...poetized with lovely imagery

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Kesav Easwaran 06 February 2010

you are really proving poetic in these lines...brilliant imagery...the 'setting' story with a tinge of sorrow- elsewhere- yellowish...imagination is the tool of creating good poems...a nice tool you own right there...10

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C. P. Sharma 31 January 2010

Awesome imagery touches its poetic heights in this poem. CP

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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 January 2010

The rivers, oceans and seas Too pay their homage Reflecting the beauty Of the moment In their clear water..................yet according the grace in deep indebtedness, superb write as when nature scintillates by beauty,10++++, thanks for sharing

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