Saturday, March 4, 2017

Changing Times Comments

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if indeed Barrow could stick to his dream
and pull old Jammeh's smelly foot out of Gambia's golden boot
after Goodluck had left Nigeria for Buhari smiling
and Ouattara, Macky Sall and Patrice Talon had unseated powerholics in the West;
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Denis Mair 14 May 2017

Excellent the way you relate dance to our most precious hopes. Dance becomes a protean emblem of sprouting new life, in contrast to SMELLY FEET and ACHING BONES and FIGHTING STICKS that mindlessly overstay their welcome like senescent elephants. In my friend’s poem A DOG POEM FOR TOMORROW on my PH page, the poet says “Tomorrow, a dog that only goes wild after death/ Holds the world in its jaws and won’t let go…” In your poem, tomorrow is when an arena will open for the dance-writ-large of everyday heroes, just living their lives worthy of human beings.

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