Monday, September 29, 2008

Changing Time Comments

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Through the restless dreams
And mindless songs
Future a shadow on sandy road
Breeze melding paths then gone.
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Kelly Allen Vinal 29 September 2008

Powerful words wrapped in stunning form! Well done!

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Manonton Dalan 29 September 2008

'as you slip and stumble without being caught'. i love this one. so does get away and why can't i? . hmmm... beautiful poem.md thanks.

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Steffi Webster

Steffi Webster

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