Tuesday, August 28, 2018

Changing The World - 01 Comments

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How many of you
shall still remain friends,
And keep standing by me
If I start speaking the Truth,
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Prabhata Kumar Sahoo 25 May 2019

First four lines are universal truth.Quite nice.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 28 October 2018

THIS POEM IS BEST. I ENJOYED THIS POEM.SIR IS A GREAT POET IN POEMHUNTER.

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Rajendra Rout 11 September 2018

Very beautiful poem shired sir. I enjoy this lovely poem 💯+++++

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Edmund Strolis 01 September 2018

What friends would desert you? We choose our friends and if we have chosen friends that will turn their backs than how do they fit the definition of a friend? The blame is not in the actions of friends freely chosen but with us and if in fact this thing called truth is revealed will they not celebrate you instead and if not either true friends are needed or a reevaluation of what we deem to be true. Which is not the same as thinking we are right.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 29 August 2018

The reality with the degrading humanity well described in the poem.

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Thanks dear poet for your kind visit and great words of encouragement.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 29 August 2018

Subhas, such a poignant poem........

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Thank you Sir for the invaluable remarks on the poem.

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Rini shibu 29 August 2018

For the purpose a different Sun needs to rise, true..a thought provoking write

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Thanks dear Rini for the nice remarks. Thanks for visiting.

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