...Changing The Color To Sunrise Comments

An exquisite piece of poetry….a smart attempt and extraordinary effort, thank you for sharing.

Poetic excellence - forceful, mystical, real, existential - this one has it all. Great writing.

wow this is a great sbstract piece I really, really enjoyed thisone thank you for sharing.

Great piece of writing.

Wow, this poem is so deep and good. I'll probably have to reread it a few hundred times just to snare a thread of it's meaning. By the way, This poem is very good. A mere ten for this write. Another twenty for your bio. Talent you've got alot. God bless and best regards-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

What's to say? I marvel at your work quite often, yet I am always faced with the same question: what comment could I possibly make that is suitable for such amazing poetry?

My mouth is agape with disbelief. I read this again and it's like reading some incredible headline. Some great lines in this........'.I would have named you myth if not for your undeniable proof.'....but even more......' You've never seen the rib torn from my cage, fractured and shaven, a perfect line, a weapon of scripture' Maybe not a perfect fine line. I felt the anxiety of trying to communicate the internal monologue of the poet, like attempting to discern the prattle of a thousand conversations, with amazement glean from the mixture a rendering near the boiling point, but not before it vaporizes and turns to mist. I was convinced by the exposition. This is what I think determines the merit of your work.

Addictive from tip to toe. Joe

'on every endeavor of ball and heal' was a very interesting line. a very mature composition.

This poem mesmerizes me.

I really like the style and concept of your poems Amberlee.. they are always so deep and meaningful.. thank you for sharing HBH