Changing Mood Comments

Yeah right masterly crafted the poem is imaginative

This is such a thoughtful poem expressing your concern for a friend in pain! Through your half witty verse, you wish to make her smile and reduce her gloom! The picture that accompanies it also is so captivating! A sure 10

There's something so special about birds. I wake up every day with the songs of birds, sometimes it is a sparrow making soft sounds, sometimes a rooster, sometimes, in Spring, the beautiful sound of the Cuckoo. I absolutely adore your poem Mr Jawad. Thanks for sharing...

An excellent imaginative write. Masterly crafted. Liked the last two lines of the third stanza. Enjoyed g trading it 10+++++++×××+++++

ONE only must enjoy the comments which u beget poet r u sir we have no regret' we have to ourselves as poets forget any one's challenge in my bet NO not as yet none will fret says this minor poet

An amazing poem, I loved reading it.

We the humans share our pain in the life..enjoyed reading this poem! ! ! ! !

We the humans share our pain in the life..enjoyed reading this poem

Not only poems are nice and catchy when written in plain English, but this on really caught me....nice write

An imaginative poem from a poet of note.++10