Changing Lanes Comments

Rich with a rabid reality that is refreshing. Well done my friend!

hi sahar...u go clicketey click... masterly short lines very well done... well if the clicking finger is yours....torment averted..! ! a subjest close to my heart.... cheers and ten

A sharp edged and fast write.........

changing lanes, Just with one click, One trick, one slip, and addicted mind, Bounced by wind, a coming dream, upstream, like a cutting beam, flight overnight, under deceit, black and white, perfect.. really you collected very sweet words and the composition is remarkable too.. meaningful way of writing and you know how to knock the doors of heart with your sweet poetry like you did here.. best of luck 10/10

Life in the fast lane