Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Changing Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

Changing days and easy ways
Resting in a violet haze,
Cast a spell and all is well
Forever through eternity,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 02 September 2008

Great flow Andrew. I sailed along with this one, a 'rocking' type of poem, love the rhyming and the rhythm in the words. Really, really nice this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 26 August 2008

I vote for this alone, you have so much talent, a fine gift indeed! ! Changing days and music plays Shining through the golden rays, The sun so bright and all is right For now I am as one, Love duncan X

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Kesav Easwaran 21 August 2008

'The sky so blue I dream of you Dreams are always coming true, All is fine for you are mine So they will carry on'... these lines, i most liked, make up the soul of this beautiful poem, Andrew... they display your confidence, the depth of your love and the inspiration you transmit on to your soul mate 10/10

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Thad Wilk 21 August 2008

A touching poem of love, pleasing and graceful to read Andrew! ! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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