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wow :) this was great... you really do have a talent for poetry...the rhythm is gret and it has a nice simple beat. yet the vocabulary and the simple beat give it a touch of elegance. well done,10 :)

This poem is just, amazing...! I can relate to this, Losing your self is very easy to do and it's hard to get your old self back. You have an amazing talent, Never give up :)

I can certainly relate to this poem. Well I used to. It's like all the emotions and thoughts from back then are made in one poem. You are really good and there is not a thing in this world that could or should stop you from keeping writing poetry. Excellent.

I can definately see how many people would relate to this, excellent poem. There is a simple message in the poem and many small message sthat can be assumed by the reader however they wish. Very well put together. Also the rhythm of the poem flows very well. two thumbs up.

This is very good. Great job :)