Saturday, June 2, 2007

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The sky is as blue as sapphire
The waves grasp the shore
Then it all changes
As quick as a whip it dulls
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Tobias Gray
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Aimee Lee 19 May 2010

i love how descriptive you are.

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Melissa Coventry 29 April 2008

Your poems show a great sense of well thought-out ideas that flow showing your concepts wonderfully. This a another masterpiece and very, very high standard of poem. Thank you and now a fond reader, Mel xx

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Aaron Tate 22 April 2008

A cycle. Good write :)

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Evaughn Gray 02 August 2007

wow..you tell lots of detail..very good poem..~hazel

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Tobias Gray

Tobias Gray

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