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changes in the warmth of the soil
from spring to summer to autumn to winter
changes in the fall of rain
from warm and pattering to cold and slashing
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A powerfully moving poem that touches the heart and soul ever so! .. And is ever so beautifully expressed! ..
Hi Susie, How you strike an analogy between changes happening in climatic conditions, in the weather patterns and the changes in human relations.Wonderful poem.
Valsa! ! ! ! I love it when you come and comment on a poem of mine and turn that intelligent mind loose on it! ! ! You make me feel good, girl
Change is there in nature, in human beings and in the total behavior pattern and relationships. When a relationship changes, there will be changes in the attitude of persons involved! In a love relationship for example, if one grows cold, it is natural for the other also to grow cold. Thus from a general perspective, you have come to a personal level! A beautiful poem with a touch of melancholy and a hint of warning!
Robert- Thank you for appreciating those last two lines- I enjoyed the twist in them! ! ! !
Thank you, Anjandev, for reading and commenting... you always have something encouraging and instructive to say
Glorious write..............very well composed.......thank u, dear poetess......anjandev roy.
As soon as I finished reading, I thought of Murnau's masterpiece, Sunrise (A Song of Two Humans) . A really stunning work, Susan. A perfect 10.
Thank you, MJ. I will look up Sunrise poem. I am pleased you enjoyed this write, my friend
Very good reacting to the changes by brilliant poet.. Amazing link between human and nature has been discovered in this lovely verse...well done 10/10 as usual
A well penned pragmatic poem, dear Ma’am Susan....10+++
Why, thank you, Bernard, for your comment- -sorry it took me so long to find it- notifications have not been notifying me so I am wandering around looking for unanswered comments
" Now i can see" ! Changes and challenges of love and life. 🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You are very welcome, Edward. And I thank you for reading it! ! !
certainly not a joyful message that's for sure. Thank you for reading and commenting
and now I see change is in you change is in the silence between us if you stay, I will stay with you if you stray, I will leave you ......even if I stay.....outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thank you once again.
Thank you, my friend. Your encouragement is always much appreciated! !
- Breeze- -I cannot find you - -there are several people called Breeze- -can you tell ne your whole moniker or the titles of some of your poems?
change comes to equalize, touches both side equally! //// great write
mahtab- having a dickens if a time replying to comments- -appreciate your comments but must type in a hurry before I am cut off- having a dickens if a time replying to comments- -appreciate your comments but must type in a hurry before I am cut off-
There is an echo of genuine sadness here. A beautiful poem which touches the heart.
Tom- - -having a dickens if a time replying to comments- -appreciate your comments but must type in a hurry before I am cut off- -I agree- life is nothing but change! Thank you for kind comment
Changes are going on in nature and in life. Some changes bring happiness and some bring grief. In Love cases it is touched impressively. An impressive poem is so amazingly delineated.
Kumarmani- - -having a dickens if a time replying to comments- -appreciate your comments but must type in a hurry before I am cut off- -I agree- life is nothing but change!
Read recently.. In a world of so many broken hearts, May our souls share the compassion of Jesus! .. This world so needs! .. May God dear
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If I could rate again, Definitely another 5 Stars! ..+++++