Thursday, November 7, 2013

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Am so confuse, even don't know where to start from, but is this how life will goes on?
I need a change,
i need a true me,
even though defeat stand in front akimbo,
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Micheal Olaniyi
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Cheryl Griffith 30 July 2014

This poem displays a significant and powerful message but need some work. It is till very raw like clay in a potter's hand and is in need of shaping. Need to check for word choice and grammar. Basically, it's a lovely poem but need some work.

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