Saturday, April 13, 2013

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I swam within the depths of you,
The waters warm and calm.
The currents soft, a gentle flow,
protected from all harm.
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Owain Glyn
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Aria Siren 20 April 2013

Changes fast too doesn't it? Beautiful words strung together to describe a horrible feeling at the end. I particularly enjoyed this verse: Winter held no power, To chill the love that burned. Your voice, a message on the wind, Would tell of spring, returned.

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Lyn Paul 17 April 2013

A really heartfelt write.

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Karen Sinclair 16 April 2013

So beautiful. Intricate and truly heartfelt. Adored this tyvm...I'm so sorry if I read this understanding it fully ty. Karen.

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