Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Changeling Comments

Rating: 5.0

Changeling changes before my own eyes,
Morphing to something I can't recognize,
'Cause in my mind I specialize,
In picking truth from little lies.
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Shyana Keajls
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Noel Horlanda 09 April 2009

a little bit rough in rhymes but at least good enough. My verdict - nice penned. Keep it up. +10

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