Thursday, March 12, 2009

Changed Ur Heart Comments

Rating: 4.1

you have changed my heart
now its time to change urs
i will start with a kiss on your neck
then i will place your hand on my waist so i will be close to u
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

I suppose this bears some relationship to reality. If it does, I hope this writer realizes that this is not enough to hold a love together. I think girls believe this to be the case. It is not true though. Hope this one doesn't learn the hard way. The writing was a bit obsessive and determined as iy should be in this case. It matched the mood. Good job. GW62

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