Nature orderly sets the sky
Empowering sun as day king
And moon takes charge of nights
Stars are ordained as rays
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awesome write. Congrats. Your last stanza is very true and the most powerful one.It echoes in my mind even after reading twice dear revered Aren't.
A fine portrayal of fascinating nature juxtaposed by the rot created by man with his mindless ways. Great poem.Thanks& Congrats, Baba. The poem goes into MyPoemList.
The power of deceitful human se, though unsuccessfully, being bent on changing the destiny of universe, though unsuccessfully, has been depicted in a melodious verse. Congrats on the poem of the Day.
A poignant rendition elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Babatunde and do remain enriched.
nature orderly sets the sky, empowering sun as day king, great poetry, great words
A thought provoking poem, Congrats for the honours POTD....10
A poem of truth? Everything changes except us! .....well penned Babatunde
Moon takes charge of the night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Nature is empowered to do something but not setting the sky and other major things
I see man as having diluted darkness with too much light rather than 'Diluted light with darkness'
Nature orderly sets the sky Empowering sun as day king And moon takes charge of nights Stars are ordained as rays All bringing joy to the world. Alas! man came on board Diluted light with darkness Christened black as white Turned the destiny of okro seed Into a distateful gall. - - - - -An amazing poem.While God has created the Universe in an orderly fashion, man has created all confusion.Congrats for being selected as Poet of the Day.
Babatunde, such a powerful poem of the day. Congrats for being picked.........10++++++++
So Very True! ! ! ! ! Beautifully! ! ! ! ! And Powerfully Put Too! ! ! ! ! Shame The Damage Man Can Do! ! ! ! ! A Very Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Excellently Done! ! ! ! Thank You So Very Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ saved
Powerful and meaningful poem that focuses on the flaws of humanity. Congratulations!