Friday, May 11, 2012

Changed Destiny Comments

Rating: 4.8

Nature orderly sets the sky
Empowering sun as day king
And moon takes charge of nights
Stars are ordained as rays
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Babatunde Aremu
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 September 2022

Powerful and meaningful poem that focuses on the flaws of humanity. Congratulations!

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Nabakishore Dash 24 September 2022

awesome write. Congrats. Your last stanza is very true and the most powerful one.It echoes in my mind even after reading twice dear revered Aren't.

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Prabir Gayen 31 December 2018

Very beautiful poem..class poem....thanks

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Babatunde Aremu 23 November 2018

Thanks for your comment

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Rajnish Manga 17 November 2018

A fine portrayal of fascinating nature juxtaposed by the rot created by man with his mindless ways. Great poem.Thanks& Congrats, Baba. The poem goes into MyPoemList.

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Babatunde Aremu 23 November 2018

Thanks for your comment.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 November 2018

The power of deceitful human se, though unsuccessfully, being bent on changing the destiny of universe, though unsuccessfully, has been depicted in a melodious verse. Congrats on the poem of the Day.

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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2018

A poignant rendition elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Babatunde and do remain enriched.

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benjamin c. uy 16 November 2018

nature orderly sets the sky, empowering sun as day king, great poetry, great words

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M Asim Nehal 16 November 2018

A thought provoking poem, Congrats for the honours POTD....10

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Matthew Holloway 16 November 2018

you used some well placed imagery here, well written

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Tom Allport 16 November 2018

A poem of truth? Everything changes except us! .....well penned Babatunde

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2018

Moon takes charge of the night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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senselessness found 16 November 2018

Nature is empowered to do something but not setting the sky and other major things

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Adrian Flett 16 November 2018

I see man as having diluted darkness with too much light rather than 'Diluted light with darkness'

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Kim Barney 16 November 2018

Nicely done. Congrats on poem of the day!

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Bharati Nayak 16 November 2018

Nature orderly sets the sky Empowering sun as day king And moon takes charge of nights Stars are ordained as rays All bringing joy to the world. Alas! man came on board Diluted light with darkness Christened black as white Turned the destiny of okro seed Into a distateful gall. - - - - -An amazing poem.While God has created the Universe in an orderly fashion, man has created all confusion.Congrats for being selected as Poet of the Day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 November 2018

Babatunde, such a powerful poem of the day. Congrats for being picked.........10++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 October 2017

So Very True! ! ! ! ! Beautifully! ! ! ! ! And Powerfully Put Too! ! ! ! ! Shame The Damage Man Can Do! ! ! ! ! A Very Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! ! Excellently Done! ! ! ! Thank You So Very Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++ saved

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Babatunde Aremu 29 October 2018

Thanks for reading my poem. Apology for belated reply

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