it is poetic till 'Wants his life to be meaningful'
after that it does not flow like a poem, its like a disconnect, though i like the way you showcase your thoughts they are reflective.
keep writing :)
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it is poetic till 'Wants his life to be meaningful' after that it does not flow like a poem, its like a disconnect, though i like the way you showcase your thoughts they are reflective. keep writing :)