Thursday, October 6, 2011

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Every rose will bud
Into something beautiful
Every man on one knee
Wants his life to be meaningful
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Victoria Horn
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Pari Dharawat 02 November 2011

it is poetic till 'Wants his life to be meaningful' after that it does not flow like a poem, its like a disconnect, though i like the way you showcase your thoughts they are reflective. keep writing :)

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