Change To Yesterday Comments
at last I know my work is almost done
and still there is another hill to climb
but I will not defeat the setting sun
before I hear a distant church bell chime
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and breath and passion always drift away when hills and valleys fade to yesterday //great verses.//trivial elements painted brilliant scenenary of emotions and feelings.
Thanks dimitrios. I would say simple elements because simplicity is never trivial.
Just while reading it I felt its rythm in my native language and decided to translate it immediatelly as i did.
A poignant piece of writing. At the end of the day, resignation to fate is the only way. An insightful depiction of aging n changes in life. It's so hard to reconcile to changes. I can feel that. A10
Thanks Nosheen. I think the secret it to let yourself feel but not be consumed by those feelings. Yes, that is acceptance.
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8/2/2025 5:05:54 AM # 1.0.0
Thoughtful write. The last four beautiful lines. It depends on our thoughts to live with passion. Aging is a process which cannot be avoided. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for reading and commenting Geetha.