Wednesday, February 7, 2018

Change To Concrete Comments

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Walking; as if I am walking in the scenery of story
Through mountain, hilly forest, bush of greenery
Walking beneath to peak, peak to beneath as spider
Seeing riding horse outside of forest, inside the tiger
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 September 2022

A beautiful poem. Many congratulations dear Mehtab!

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Sultan Deen 25 February 2021

Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power We are all with the gnomon walk since nature to falsetto /// nostalgic place sometimes becomes a point of recolleting; beautiful your description

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

We are living here, leaving the wood of nature now we are living in the forest of bricks, stone, cement and concreate life! - masterly crafted

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Moore Noore 28 January 2021

Natural world now changing into concrete - it's reality, reality none can deny we have live there to welcome every new reality through this concrete life

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Mac Che 21 January 2021

it's your poem where I can smell your city which is now changed completely

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Dr. Antony Theodore 02 January 2021

Thank u dear MAHTAB BANGALEE for your great thoughts. tony

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Dr. Antony Theodore 02 January 2021

Cottage, dark meal, vehicle's cacophony now its deal Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power We are all with the gnomon walk since nature to falsetto. Reflections, nature, facts of life. thank u dear Mu

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Susan Williams 22 November 2020

Walking; as if I am walking in the scenery of story Through mountain, hilly forest, bush of greenery Walking beneath to peak, peak to beneath as spider- - - - - - - - such an adventure you took us on and it was like we walked beside you and smelled the spicy pine- thank you for taking us there to a time the land didn't lie beneath concrete... beautiful piece

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Terry Craddock 12 September 2020

Preserve Majestic Awe-inspiring Tiger the loss of habitat the loss of fauna flora spells extinction event for territory vast dependent majestic tiger unless we preserve protect in sanctuaries desolate concrete jungles are barren substitutes Inspired by the poem 'Change To Concrete' by the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE. Dedicated to the poet MAHTAB BANGALEE.

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Terry Craddock 10 September 2020

the loss of habitat, the loss of fauna flora, spells extinction event, for territory vast dependent tiger, unless we preserve protect in sanctuaries

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Mrudula Rani 27 July 2020

This is the state of affairs now every where in the world, loss of nature and wild life! And concrete replicates reminding us what we have lost!

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 July 2020

No one lived out of the fort in the reign of Nawabi power Here there everywhere of this mountain was tiger's chivalry Since that TigerPass was the name of this land as the glory a fine writing about Tiger pass. liked it very much. tony

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Cowboy Ron Williams 01 July 2020

Very nice poem, and I love the picture! I would invite you to read my poems (I have five of them) but my account is new and Poem Hunter has not activated them yet. I don't understand this. I thought people would be able to read them at once when they were posted!

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Mohabeer Beeharry 04 June 2020

Hi sometimes I wonder why people kill tigers and other animals for money. Recently 5/7 elephants were butchered in Africa. Very sad in.deed.this is a beautiful write reminiscencing on the Tigers. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Harindhar Reddy 27 April 2020

Yup the the tiger is an imagery, hence it stands for all animals in the poem. Further poet pointed how forests are eroded by man in recent decades. Most of living beings dying a death in the hands of man.. Very expressive poetry....

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Everything is not permanent which is a realitry.An amazing write!

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Michael Walker 16 February 2020

A very striking photo in light green and a poem which resonates. I like poems about walking.

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DUDE STOPPPPP 27 February 2020

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2020

No forest but greenery bush still carries the memento Cottage, dark meal, vehicle's cacophony now its deal Concrete tiger stands now to recollect pre animal power We are all with the gnomon walk since nature to falsetto. This poem is really very very beautiful. thank u dear poet. Mahtab. tony

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Denis Mair 28 May 2019

We walk on the face of an experimental sundial. We walk with the gnomon's shadow, which is thrown by the light of partial understanding into the future. The tiger's absence is in that shadow. A very thought provoking write.9

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2019

Now I am running by vehicle through its divided hill The land is over there with that's name except the tiger/No forest but greenery bush still carries the memento....your personal experience of traveling through lush green area though little modernized is fascinatingly expressed in this poem!

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