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I havve read your poem and liked it! Thank you for inviting me to read it.

to recapitulate the different changes we undergo shows where we r this moment...

Achange is ever under revision Each moment a new life envision Normal behavior is artificiality galore Deviations from it the truth explore CP

Bi polarity is not so easy to bear Manic phase can be productive, the downside destructive But they are only extremes of normal behaviour. You can regainn control

Sarah, Your Change touched my heart and soul. Keep writing

Each two liner gives a separate image and emotions like a plain talk, , good poetry Sarah, , , a 10

I loved the raw emotion of this poem Sarah, It's a thriller of passionate lines that drip down the page.....wonderful 10 Keep expressing Jon London