Status in life changes day by day
Promotion, it seems may come your way
Grandchildren, visit always a pleasure
Older versions, still a treasure.
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your Poet's Notes helped me to take better hold of the last two lines. thanks. i like people to call me by my first name, actually Brian, but has been used (in the distant past once or twice i think; adoringly of course) . so you've been promoted to Grandfather, it seems. and Great grandfather yet? population explosion! ! ! ! ha ha. bri ;) p.s. i still like my one and only child to call me Dad, and she does...the rare times i hear from her. ha ha...again.
Thank you Bri, thank goodness for author notes. This new tribe that gather around us oldies are an amazing bunch, I am always looking up when spoken to, the land of the giants?
Beautiful written poem John Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken
An imaginative write and a bit unusual. +++10 Hope you and your wife are feeling better John. I have POD today. Regards Robert
Thank you Robert, life is good as is reading and writing poetry, onward and upward. John