Tuesday, February 26, 2008

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How can people get so distant?
Time goes by
days weeks moths and even years
Still the hours pass away
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Neil Marsden 12 October 2008

You have cleverly put voice to a series of age old enigma, excellent self control and constraint throughout leaving a wonderfully diginified piece of poetry. Take care! Neil.

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Saskia Harjono 26 February 2008

life..oh..life.. so complex! it's a realistic expression on people and life.. good one

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Louise Witwit

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