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Yet non asked why. The meaninglessness of our own actions........very well portrayed. tony

A true picture on changes has been astutely painted. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

A nice satire on the present state of society- everybody running after mirages.

portraing the human character in the society in which we live. a very fine poem in short verses.. tony

An amazing little Haiku! The great question mark is still unanswered! Beautiful...Thanks for sharing....10

If one person starts to run, he may have a good reason, at least for himself. Whether or not it is a reason for the others to run is doubtful, but possible. Sometimes in the acute phase it is not unwise to run with the crowd. The real problem occurs that the crowd behavior persists without being questioned even after we had ample time to see and reflect on what is really happening. Thought provoking poems. Poems that are thought provoking are (for me at least) among the best poems on earth.

This is a poem for our times. Succinct and profound. Excellent write.

Blind followers are the majority and what for they sometimes never asks.

Everything for a change, mundane chores, dull the mind, thanks poet

One Word to define the poem Lively but blind Its Just an Eye opener to all Understand the path your moving.. Thanks for sharing! ! !

Interesting flow of action in this concise poem, with images of running without reason. The title could be Chaos instead of Change because change is done for a reason and with a direction.

This is a short buy profound poem.

People not interested to know other people's woes and worries. Change that is the essence of life and a good poem.

Change is always needed in life. Nice work.

Deep and powerful lines! Well done.

Change is a muse and necessity in life. We observe that all are running to grasp material happiness but all are not getting. This is entirely excellently thought provoking.10

Yet non asked why. you have powerfully depicted in short verse, the mass movement, and the senselessness of mass behaviour. thank you dear poet. tony

Yeah, we all chasing after a mirage. Very nice.

That's such a true picture of the world. That's how change occurs, people following each other blindly. Brevity n precision..two words for your poem.

This world is one confused stage and all we do is follow each-other blindly. Who has time to stop and retrospect in the happening. Short and abrupt.