Tuesday, November 14, 2006

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Thoughts broke down from my dreams demise
As I shut my dreaming eyes
Stars flickered out
My wish lost truth
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Rowan Carpenter
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Madly In Love 17 April 2007

Wow Christal this is such a powerful poem

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Jon Lloyd 23 November 2006

Short and potent, like an espresso. Beautifully written. Jx.

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