Saturday, October 11, 2014

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Things have changed
The world is not what it used to be
I am still adjusting
After many years away from this world
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

Change can be grought in life any time if one wishes to change..iron rods are ephemeral change of mind, you know when one sit or be with saints they act like saint, gone he gone with the saint hood like a stone put in water..wet.. remove it..dry.. nice poem ye composed and your protagonist has changed himself thanks a lot and thanks for comment 10

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