Tuesday, January 31, 2006

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Condensation forms on the window pane,
My hair becomes damp, as I lean, getting tired,
The sound is faint, but I can hear the rain,
Splattering on the road, soaking the tyres.
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Jack Bell
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nikki Davis 07 February 2006

your poem was great i really enjoyed reading it. i hope to read more soon nikki

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