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What a wonderful poem, reminds me of my two sons, they were always trying to please me also. I would tell them how proud I was of them, respected them, they are both fantastic men, great gentle fathers providing for their families. Always doing things for us, their parents, taking us out to eat, getting things for us, and they both call us every single day to see how we're doing. As a Mom, Grandma, Aunt and Great Aunt, I am truly blessed in this life. Make your Mom see your love and caring in a poem just for her, show your unique self in the love you have for her, let it be all about her and how she makes you feel. It will definitely touch her heart in ways you will never expect. Take care, Don. You are an excellent poet. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

To be your perfect child! ! With the hustle and bustle in Africa. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Eyes are burning from the tears of emotion. Trying to become a better child is interesting. Promise given to mother is tender. Her affection gives power of feelings. Changing life into a good personality is great aspect. This is very emotional and an outstanding affectionate poem...10

but Mom, I really did try and I'm still trying to change to this day Trying to change my horrible ways..................liked the last verse... mum i am changing for you. a very touching poem, the love for mum, changing to please the loving heart of ur mum, , tony

A lovely poem from the heart embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing bro and do remain blessed.

A matchless poem on mother's love. Thank you very much, Don.

Cause mummy I am trying to change for you. Nice love and commitment. keep changing.A 10 for the poem.