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Oh! ...here is a young poet who writes for a cause...liked your thought process and for that you deserve 10++++

yes i know your feeling......very good poem friend..

oh! ! ! ! i know this feeling friend.. hey i sort of know what you must be going through.. your guy friends must be thinking you are some sort of freak isnt it? .... that you are some insane person may be... you know these days society is sick.. i used to be sick too.... now i v changed lots.... and i like the way you express yourself... specially last few lines... with lots of love shan

'I change to be liked' Yes, we all change to be liked And it happens not only At your age Steve - Even now We find change is a process A continuous process of life. Reflections of your emotions The best source of poetry Is from within thyself And you do go deep! Good Work! Angel

did you read P.Watzlavick? The more we grow and change, the less we ain't that same.You say well.After reading this nice poem I'm not the same I was before.

'' I have changed so much don't really know who i am'' interesting poem nice penned with deep ideas..10

You are what you are. Which is? ? Cheers. Subroto

SOMETIMES IT IS BEST TO CHANGE YOUR FRIENDS, RATHER THAN YOUR PERSONALITY. IF YOU FIND FAULTS IN YOURSELF, THEN MAKE THE CHANGES, BUT NOT TO JUST KEEP OTHERS HAPPY AND YOU TO BE SAD. ANOTHER TEN MY BRONXITE FRIEND

Most of us know this feeling and most of us at one time or another have tried to change to please people...but when you get to be my age or even nearly my age you realise that the effort outweighs the advantages and you please yourself mostly grinning at the person you once were and the so called friends you once had..... This thing they call life is a strange one....I call it Earth School........we the people of the earth make the rules we have to live by.....we give ourselves headaches, heartache and pain....see now you've made my brain work - time to lighten up I think..... Ruthy - great poem by the way! You've a real talent.

Important questions, you ask, Steven. Keep writing. Your feelings resonate with your readers, and making that connection is the power in, and of, poetry. Shoshi

I fell like everyone can relate to this one. The questions only add to it, it makes ppl really see the struggle. I love the part about whether or not you wondered if you were a 'groupie'. I think we've all been in that situation, like you lose your identity. Keep writing.

I like your honesty here and the inner struggle you experience to gain 'acceptance' - but the most important things are the questions you put in the poem, and the resolve you faced, which is a start to 'Change' (the productive kind) . Just be yourself and never mind what other people think. 10+

Very well said in eloquence...nice expressed thoughts and feelings...10/10

Well, change is the only thing that doesn't change in this world. But we should always change for better, thats what is more important. Well expressed and the flow is good. Read my poem 'Change' too when you have time.

wonderful sincere write

Fanastic job Its wht we go through We just feel so confused and lost 10+++ Sometimes wht we do change for who we are to impressed people when we shouldnt b/c they should luv u for who ur

i Apsolutely Love This Poem. Its so; its Just Expresses What alot of People/teenages Go Through Not Really knowing Who Thay Are. Because there Growing to Find out Who They want to be.

i think that we never change even if we do we only change from outside not from inside cause inside us we are always the same even if we show another face to people, to change or to be fake can be a part of our personality that's why we should know well our selves.it's true that when we grow of course we change the way we think but always a part of us still alive.lovely poem, keep on, you are exellent.

actually u r not fake. i can see it that u r a great poet well done! Luwi

Nice Poem. But change is the rule of the world. Adaptation to survive.