Monday, May 18, 2009

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Will I make it to the end?
While the sun sets on my hopes and dreams,
Will I find my way at last?
While the moon rises to free my inhibitions.
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Christopher Montalvo
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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 May 2009

The theme is excellent. Style impeccable.

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Naidz Ladia 23 May 2009

for me, this is great..this will go to my fav, , i like the contents..naizz

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Barbara Jean 19 May 2009

I luv it, your poem kinda expresses the way i feel sometimes.

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Christopher Montalvo

Christopher Montalvo

Brooklyn, NY
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