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Slowly the Sun bids farewell
Closes its eyes and zips its lips
Not to shine again as the day suddenly drifts
Only for the Moon to say, 'It's okay, you've done well'.
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This is just wonderful. Because this poem is a perfect example of a poem where the title is critical to the writing itself. The title defines this poem completely. I don't believe I have ever seen a better example of it. GW62
A beautiful panoramic poem with wonderful lively imagery. Keep up the good work, Johannes.......10/10. Best Wishes Naseer
I liked this one. I liked the rhythm and the message. Great write! Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth
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7/21/2025 9:45:37 AM # 1.0.0
hmmmmmmmmmm......were u created by God? how come he endowed u with so much lyrics to make evry poem of urs so enchanting? this one in particular s a true masterpiece! ! keep the fire burning! !