Wednesday, October 26, 2005

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For the longest time
She stood and stare in the mirror
Murmuring and cursing it ain’t fair
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Konjit Berhane
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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 June 2009

An outstanding poem. The last stanza is very nice. You have crafted the idea crossing over your generation! So beautiful and so touchy composition. Your intelligence and imagination is nicely bloomed here in this poem. With joy I added my 10.

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Charles Chaim Wax 02 November 2005

you have touched on a profound problem of human existence in a very lovely charming poem keep up the good work

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