Monday, September 1, 2008

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Rating: 4.5

Changes are all around me
They just won’t let me be

It’s hard to see life pass me by
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mithzi silva
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Jason Taylor 18 September 2008

Change Is so hard I hate it when you get close to someone and They leave you. I hate goodbyes to. But in life u have to understand change happens everyday and as time goes on. This was a really great poem and I think the end was good to when you say I’ve still got my girls Its really nice well done a 9 from me.

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Aldo Kraas 18 September 2008

It is very difficult to make changes in our lives And it is also difficult to accept change

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Stephanie Fiddy 15 September 2008

awww this is my favorite poem of yours mitz! ! ! ! !

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