Tuesday, July 15, 2008

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It is so hard, but I know what I have to do
Change my life, and my attitude
I need to change from the inside out
Well if I can do it, there is some doubt
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cassy carmody
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, aryaindia 21 July 2008

According to our Hindu epic 'the Mahabharata', change is the only way to betterment and success. We have to move on and this you have brought out in your poem but only partly. I think you should change the verse to be more positive in its feel of things. Luck and god bless you, arya

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Linda Weischedel 15 July 2008

Great poem, professing how you feel deep inside. Thank you for sharing Cassy, I honestly related to this here poem. Linda

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