Change Comments

According to our Hindu epic 'the Mahabharata', change is the only way to betterment and success. We have to move on and this you have brought out in your poem but only partly. I think you should change the verse to be more positive in its feel of things. Luck and god bless you, arya

Great poem, professing how you feel deep inside. Thank you for sharing Cassy, I honestly related to this here poem. Linda