Creases brown and dirty, like a map-
creases caked with dirt, silt in tiny rivers.
Sweat compelled the dust on my palms
to form this geography.
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Well conceived execution of your imagination. Your detailed imagery brought the poem to life. I don't know what your inspiration was for this, but you made it feel real. Very impressive.
Alexandra, Without a doubt, my favorite work of yours.