Thursday, June 4, 2009

Chanda Mama (The Moon) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life in the moon
Is there or not?
People living there is
Black or white?
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Tara Chettur
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Mayur Soni 12 December 2009

Better humans keep away from moon there's no room from violence there. very nicely compiled

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premji premji 08 June 2009

moon....knight of the night!

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Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

A true picture of moon for why it is loved by almost everyone on the planet earth is just splendid Tara. Especially the overwhelming effect of the moonlight lits the innerself so brightly that once feels really calm......a very beautiful poem with good usage of natural images........10/10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 June 2009

Why should anyone look for reality, When the imagination brings so much ecstasy! wonderful lines. shan 10

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Kesav Easwaran 04 June 2009

let the moon remain a baby home Tara...good imaginations there...thanks...10

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the love for the moon shows in your write'''please read my 'the oldest pair' asi was reading your piece i was inspired to write a senryu ' amiss made good' moon really inspires

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