Saturday, September 9, 2017

Chances We Let Go Comments

Rating: 3.7

We let go of many chances
When opportunity comes
Knocking at our doorstep
Because of what we have heard
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Nudershada Cabanes
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 June 2023

Liked the last four lines! A wonderful poem. I rated it 1 star though it deserves 5 stars (rating system has no meaning here) !

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Bri Edwards 20 September 2019

almost last line: wrapped? well, you certainly have described a pitfall for some people. personally, i've never turned down the chance to marry a woman if she could " stand me" and/or, of course, if she had lots of money. i goofed x3 because my first 3 wives didn't have 'lots of money'! ! NOW I don't. : ( to MyPoemList bri :)

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