Should I write? I’m afraid I will,
I twirl my pen in a complex ride
As I sit on my window-sill,
to forget how my dreams have died.
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Great poem and style, well written and message eloquently conveyed. I love to read poems like these, where the reader feeds on a full meal of literary meat, not getting indigestion from a maze of words where one has to dissect the meaning. A treasure to find and a blessing to read! 10++++
Dada no one has a chance as a poet now that you have rolled you dice today Ican'nt help but say wow to see your poetic skills at play ....
hey very inspiring poem. is it addressed to the young generation. wonderfull.posted 10 love surya
superb write...wonderful thoughts...appealing inspiring... i love the flow of words...the thoughts and the impact it gives... an elegant one...sends a feeling of assurance in life.. chances are...for everyone who will act and move to achieve what they want in life... chances are...possible with God's help and man's action.. CHANCES are....you will be more famous in the field of poetry... by your piece..we are encourage to grab all the chances.... 10++++ l♥ vel♥ ts, _maia_
Words there dance at your will...i love this write simply for its diction and for the presentation style...and writing poetry is an art more about how expressed than what expressed...beautiful piece...10+
A mighty fine poem Subroto..oh yes..........love the last line......John
Ive seen alot of other people say this already but it is quite nice to read from what seems to be the work of a true poet not that your the only one theres alot here but your very good and refreshing to see these things written in ways other than CAPIN on words like SUICIDE, PAIN, AGONY which im guilty of myself but i hope im not too repetitive lol and way good job and thanks for the great poetic imagery
this is an amazing write.loneliness sits at sorrows bottom- unusual imagery. we have to take our chances, no one got anywhere by sitting on the fence. life is a school, where you learn each moment. 10 Mamta
The closing lines sum up the poem well, a very readable write.