Monday, July 18, 2011

Chances Comments

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chances don't always stay embracing
changes is what life is always chasing

try to understand the reason
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Brian Trujillo
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this poem has a great rhythic flow and rhyme. i liked this poem i liked what you had to say in it. in very few words you said alot. this very nice. life is full of chances, live life to the fullest dont put the chances aside 4 the more chances you take the more life will have for you. i enjoyed this poem. well done. i scored it a ten. amazing job. i loved what you have/ had to say.

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Brian Trujillo

Brian Trujillo

NJ, USA
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