Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Chances Comments

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I've given you so many chances,
And you've only let me down.
I've tried to show a smile,
But it's replaced with a frown.
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Ever Love 25 July 2012

I loved reading this poem! Good Job!

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Aubriana Munoz 05 November 2009

that was a good poem keep the good work

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Donielle Smith 04 November 2009

I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem. Excellent write! ! I been there, so I can very much relate, sometimes its best to just move on. Keep up the good work! ! luv it! ! D. Smith...........

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