Friday, December 5, 2008

Chanced Air Comments

Rating: 4.5

There was a certain air about her.
She exhaled it in deeply measured stutters as
I watched her weave her way through the raindrops
Harbour bound.
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 December 2008

Nice poem.....Fragrance of nostalgia.

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Fay Slimm 12 December 2008

Beautifully written Linda - and glad to have found your page....you give, in the penultimate line, a subtly nostalgic reason for the whole piece, so it gives poignancy to the reading...... a well constructed verse.... thank you and warm wishes from Fay - - along with a 10 - xx

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linda jenkinson

northallerton yorkshire uk
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